The
large grey colored sky that stretched across the land brought with it a cool,
slight breeze that chilled my body as it blew across the yard that was scatted
with thousands of acorns occasionally parted by grayish white mushrooms as they
fought to reach the surface. The heat resting on my pink fingers contrasted the
rest of my body as I used them to clutch a warm bowl full of a soup like
substance that released a cloud of white steam into the early winter air. I
used the plastic spoon that rested within to raise this unfamiliar creation,
that I would later find out was called chicken and dumplings, to my lips. My
mouth was pleased not only from the good taste of the food, but also the warmth
that it brought to the rest of my body. I took a glance beside me at the low
cracked cemented wall which, like most everything else in the yard, lay beneath
the dry outreaching branches of a towering tree. My sister had chosen this spot
on the wall to rest on as she finished off her own bowl of dumplings. An unspoken
communication brought her to her feet and caused us both to step forward. We
made our way across the yard every once in a while picking up a stick or acorn
to toss in the few blades of grass that made themselves visible. After we
successfully stumbled our way through the dirt terrain ripped apart by vain
like roots, we stood facing an old door that stood as part of a small white
house whose age had become visible as the weather ate away at the physical
appearance. This house was familiar to my sister and I, both of us had made
several visits here before.
My fingers chilled as I
grabbed onto the metal knob that was attached to the door and a squealing creak
arose as it moved inward towards the house. We made our way though the kitchen
that laid directly behind the door. The remains of the dumplings were kept warm
in a visible pot that remained on the stove. We both declined the invitation of
a second serving that the sight of this pot brought. Instead we continued
through to the living room, made lively by a television that set near the floor
and the noise of exchanging conversation. We both eased onto the cold, hard
wooden floor then let our weight carry our bodies to settle up against an old
couch that our mother had been sitting on since we had first arrived at the
house. The owner of the house, an old lady whose age was as apparent as the
house itself, set across the room in a cushioned chair and took the opportunity,
when there was a break in conversation, to speak to us. She asked, “Would you
like me to cut you a slice of cake?” A smile formed upon my face as I replied,
“Yes please, grandma.” It always seemed that on these visits that there would
be a flawless pound cake mounted on the counter with a glass cover hovering
just above it to protect its goodness from the rest of the world. This fact
always excited me because the taste of her pound cake was unmatched by any that
I had ever tried, or would ever try. My sister and I followed the lady the
short distance to the kitchen and anxiously waited as we watched the blade of
the knife come down and glide though the brown outside layer of the cake. Our
eyes light up as she placed the plates and forks in our outreached hands. We
then moved to reclaim our spaces on the floor. After several minutes the slice
of cake that had rested in my hand had turned into small inedible crumbs and
there was a migration to the door. After hugs were exchanged I followed my Mom
and sister as they walked through the yard and found their way into the vehicle
parked closest to the entrance of the house. My eyes remained fixed on the
house as we made our way down the long driveway then onto the road. As we
advanced forward the house became smaller until the horizon completely
swallowed the small spec and it could no longer be seen.
Years later we would stroll through
those same halls again, this time focusing on every room, every wall, every
little detail down to the key holes that made their way completely through the
interior doors unlike any I had seen up to this point, allowing our minds to
absorb all that it could from the images that stood before us. For this visit
was not like the others, there was no half cut pound cake waiting on the
counter top for our arrival, no television screening the daily soap opera, no
joyful conversation between a lady and her grandmother. No, this visit would be
filled with sorrow as we detached items from their natural habitat, placed them
in boxes, and moved them to new resting places. We would find ourselves having
to depart from several memorable items one being the old couch fondly
remembered, having paid its service as a sort of center piece for holiday
gatherings with the family for many years. We went away that day carrying
handfuls of memories, which people passing by could easy mistake for simple
cardboard boxes and donation type items. What we left behind however, was but
an old vacant structure sitting, waiting to be filled one day with new faces.
The new inhibitors will able to mask the old house to the rest of the world
with paint and new doors to accompany the latest renovations. But these
modifications will remain transparent to our eyes, as the beautiful old home
with the sweet old lady rocking along inside, shines though in our hearts and
in our mind.
Wow Allan--this is amazingly well written. It drew me in from the first moment. I knew you were an excellent artist, but it seems your artistic ability extends to creaive memoirs too. Just beautifully written and I truly enjoyed reading it! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI love how descriptive this is. The first sentence made me want to read more and more. This memoir is mysterious and interesting. I think you're a great writer.
ReplyDeleteI wish I could do that!!! Without a doubt you can tell your an artist by the way you describe everything, so detailed. The way you used contrast and the colors... instead of seeing what you wrote like a movie I viewed it like I was looking at a painting.
ReplyDeleteAllan this piece was amazing your descriptive skills are truly amazing, I was able to experience the sadness you guys felt when you guys returned to the house to oick up the belongings. It felt as if I were living this also and as if I were a part of the story too.
ReplyDeleteWow, this is amazingly detailed and descriptive. Each line has its own set of emotions and each emotion brings you a second into the future. Its very strong and influential. You would definitly make a great writer.
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