Children in the Wade
Children wade in a clear pool of sweet tropical water. It
is warm and soothing to their bare flesh that is decorated in tiny lacerations
and cuts from the thicket of the palm forest that surrounds these heavenly
waters.
“Isaac, look!” Mary dips underneath the crystalline
waters, her long golden hair fanning out like the tails of a koi fish. “Watch
Isaac, watch me.” She giggles, rippling the surface of the waters with her
spasmodic splashes.
Isaac smiles back at his beloved little sister. Her face
is split ear to ear, her pearly whites gleaming in the light of the day. In the
far corner of the pool a boy with midnight hair and midnight eyes sits watching
the two angelic siblings frolic in the misty waters. The boy cannot be seen by
the children but the children can be seen by the boy. In the boy’s world the
warm crystalline pool that the children imagine is that of an icy tundra. The clear
waters are frigid and the surrounding area is covered in jagged stalagmites of
black ice that reach towards the black sky like vicious fangs and claws.
“Mary!” Isaac calls energetically. His bright blue eyes
reflect the mysterious ashen colored boy on the other side of the water.
“Mary!”
The little boy cocks his head to the side. The whole
socket of his eyes reflects nothing but the blackness that they are.
“Mary?” Isaac’s eyes that were only a few moments ago
vibrant and enthusiastic were now filled with confusion and despair.
The little boy cocks his head once more this time a thin
smile outlines his ashen face.
“Mary? Mary!” Isaac wades around frantically violently
splashing the surface of the crystalline pool. He dives and then emerges, dives
once more and then emerges. “Mary!” He splutters. “Maaaaaary! Maaar….” Isaac is
cut off mid-sentence. His voice lost in the straightening of the ripples.
The boy raises from the pool his bare body dripping acid
water as he glides to the opposite side. A thin grin spreads once more across
his ghostly flesh were the children last played. He steps out of the water,
steam rises as his feet touch the earth. He reaches his hands outward slowly,
just barely touching with the tips of his fingertips, the newly arisen icy
pillars. Inside of one is a girl with lovely golden hair spread out like the
tails of a koi fish. In the other was a boy with the most beautiful sea blue
eyes. He smiles once more leaning his forehead against the icy sculptures. A
small laughter escapes his lips. He presses them towards the sculptures and
lightly kisses them.
The boy speaks for the first time in a long time. His
voice was quiet, awkward with a hint of confusion. “Good night.”
* * *
A light beams down from a ceiling making the sterilized
and stoic room resemble that of the inside of a womb. The walls throb and beat
as if it were a living being. Violet eyes rimmed with scarlet stare blankly at
the chalkboard. The scratch, scratch of delicate manicured nails on powdered
chalk drives grates into the ears of the six pair of listless eyes. The violet
eyes continue to stare blankly into a void.
“Is Miss V. always this upset?” A pair of dull blue eyes
inquires.
“Shh, Maxwell. Greek and Latin are hard enough without
one of them being a dead language.” A head filled with golden halos of swirls
and curls bounce with every enunciation. “Maybell does not like to be
interrupted when Maybell is trying to learn.” Her green eyes glow like
emeralds.
Maxwell’s hair is the color of wet clay. It lies flatly
along his face except for two tuffs on either side of his head that act like a
second pair of ears.
Maxwell sneers. “Maxwell was just asking an honest
question. Maxwell did not mean to hinder anybodies learning. Maxwell is oh so
sorry. Please for--.”
“Maxwell!” Maybell squeals. “Maybell does not like this
mocking at--” The locks on the door squeal and churn. The main hinge unlocks
and the door begins to open. “--all.” Maybell’s voice falters at the sound.
The entire class turns at the sound of the door. Inside
each of their minds a multitude of questions resonate. Who is it? A visitor? How rare? Boy? Girl? Ashen flesh peaks
through the crack in the door and lips that are palely thin. Midnight eyes
stare into six faces reflecting wholly in into six pairs of eyes. The gravity
of them is incomprehensible. However the eyes do not reflect back into the darkness
of the midnight eyes. The boy’s midnight hair fringes over his t eyes creating
deep clouds and even deeper shadows around them. Thin lips spread into an eerie
grin.
The teacher smiles slightly, a grimace lightly touching
the corners of her lips. She gently places the piece of chalk down along the
metal rimming of the chalkboard. Her long delicate nails brush the top of her
teacher’s desk as she begins to speak. “Welcome --”
Meesa--I didn't have to read too long before figuring out this was you! You already have your own style of writing--a recognizable voice. That is something many adult writers struggle all their lives to find. I truly hope you will keep up with your writing and start sending out work to be published.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really creative piece,it makes me want to know what is going to happen to the kids in the classroom.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good piece, I enjoy the way that you word things, it sounds very professional. But, you shouldnt just leave us hanging haha.
ReplyDeleteWow, I felt like I was reading an actual novel. Love your style of writing. I agree with Mrs. Biondi, you should send your work in to be published.
ReplyDeleteDang, that was a really good story. Just like everybody else said, you should publish this on a even bigger blog.
ReplyDeletethis is a really crazy stroy it was like reading a professional writers book or something
ReplyDeleteYour descriptions throughout are unreal. You really did a great job with them.
ReplyDeleteMeesa, this story is so you. I like how descriptive the people and places are, it makes it feel like you're actually there.
ReplyDeleteI lov ethe way you used descriptions to ad din every little detail of the story.
ReplyDeleteMeesa, you have a very distinctive style when to your writing and you make good use of it, too. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteThis was Amazing. I was on my the egde of my seat the whole time I was reading this and before I knew it I was done. You should write Novels. This is really great.
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