How much is needed to destroy
This dilemma that tortures me
At night? Does not give me joy
Nor does it give me glee.
I enclose myself and drain
My dreams, why do I need them?
They only cause me pain,
If only I was just a stem.
If I knew myself I would as well
Turn my head and feel lament
They say that love swells
And I feel torment.
I never understood how
To prevent that feeling
That breaks my vow
When you’re not here.
And so together age,
But I couldn’t make you happy
And so I turn the page
And leave unhappy.
I've felt this kind of love leaving me in the dust too. It was a strugle but I found someone to make me happy and I'm 135% positive that you will find a love that is as true to you as you are to it.
ReplyDeleteI like this peice, it is a well written ballad in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteLooks like you have some fans who identify with your work here Antonio. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI too can also see where your coming from Antonio, and I think its a brve ballad from the heart
ReplyDeleteYou're really brave for writting this because I can't express my feelings like that
DeleteThis borught me back to some not so great memories. They way you described it though putting this into a ballad came out amazing.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy that you delved into such a deep poetic sense.
ReplyDeleteThere's a lot of emotion and passion in this ballad.
ReplyDeleteI have to say I know how you feel in this piece of art. Making someone happy and keeping them that way is a life long goal.
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